I felt something cold touch my shoulder and started to turn around slowly,
but there was nothing in sight. “I must of went ahead of my friends,” I thought. Then I came across a home. Slowly entering, I saw a dark hallway. Before I got a chance to even exit, SLAM! The door shut behind me and was jammed. Five minutes later a strange girl banged on the window. In dark red ink she wrote, “Let me in.” I screamed and ran. Then I saw her on the balcony. Once I lost her I went back to the door and tried pulling on the knob, but it didn't work. Next I tried a sledge hammer and hit it on the door. It didn't work either. “This door is creepily strong,” I whispered unclearly to myself. I turned around and saw a toy jackpot sitting on the nightstand. I pulled the lever and got an easy win. Three ticket pictures in a row. All of the sudden a lamp was floating in the air. Right when I saw it, the lamp dropped and shattered. I slowly walked near and felt the smooth pieces and also the bumpy pieces. Then I heard the door crack open. I turned to see the girl, and she said, “Help me.” I started to run out the door, and on the porch I saw a letter addressed to me. I picked it up it up and started to read the letter. Dear S, I've been watching you. I've seen your every move. During the day and during the night. I need your help to, uh, save the world. I need you to retrieve something. Find out more information at 666 Hollow Road. Then I start running because something was following me. I didn't trust the letter, so I found my friends went far away from the address on the letter. By: S
3 Comments
JP
10/22/2018 09:56:03 am
What an interesting walk with friends this ended up being!!
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Stephanie Tomlinson
10/22/2018 07:47:23 pm
I wonder what was really at 666 Hollow Rd?
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Vickie Lucas
10/23/2018 03:29:55 pm
Very scary images, and well written. The plot of the story is well thought out and leaves the reader wondering, what is at that other location? The letter was an interesting plot twist, I didn't see that coming, the girl was scary enough, but saving the world wasn't what I expected!
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