Spooky Story
By LoL One time in a deep, dark forest where you could not see daylight, there was a big house. It looked haunted to me, and that's when all of my friends dared me to go inside. That's where my story begins. All of my friends dared me to go in, so I did. At first it was good until I saw red eyes in the pitch black dark. I ran to the light spot on the first floor. There was no time to go upstairs, and then I saw it. It was so creepy. It was Pennywise! Ever since I was a kid, I have been afraid that of P-P-Pennywise. It was good that I lost him for awhile until I had another problem. I could not believe what I was seeing! There were some cute gummy bears, but the then I realized they were vicious little monsters. Good thing I had a good appetite! I…I… ate them, and that is the good news. The bad news is it was pitch black again like when P-P-Pennywise appeared. It was...it was...it was indescribable. It was not too big, not too small. It was my size. It...it...it...is a huge box? What?! Ah! It was moving! My friends called me, and they said, “Open it!” I looked to the window. There they were. Um, ok...gasp! It was a cute bunny. Aww, how cute! “Ok,” I thought, “I am ditching this place for good!” Cue the sound of someone running out a creaky, old door.
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Stephanie Tomlinson
10/22/2018 07:45:55 pm
But what was on the other side of the creaky old door?
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Vickie Lucas
10/23/2018 03:26:45 pm
Very well written, good thing you like sugar, those gummy bears didn't have a chance...but quick thinking to eat them. This is very descriptive, multiple themes/locations in the house that are well thought out. Great use of vocab words, and glad that it was a cute bunny in that box, I knew you were going to open it.....or was it???
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