Haunted House
By: Kitty Cat Meow Meow My friend had never believed in GHOSTS until she saw an abandoned house, and she received a note from her friend that said, “HELP! I'M TRAPPED!”She was so STUNNED! She went to save her, but the MONSTER’S plan was to AMBUSH her! The MONSTER CALCULATED that if she was next to the cage, they would… actually, I'm not going to tell you what happens, so anyway she went in the house. In the dark, spooky house was a dark, spooky door, and behind the dark spooky, now with holes (when you open it, it has holes ) , door... There is a POT as smooth as a BABY’S SKIN boiling with water (actually with a potion ). She could not see the WITCH , and the MONSTER thought his plan was over, but she didn't see it! She kept going, and the MONSTER said, “YES! MY PLAN IS HAS NOT ENDED!” Then he went to go yell at the WITCH ! Ha Ha! Meanwhile… in a dark, spooky hall which led to a spooky room with COBWEBS and SPIDERS, and it was supposed to be a bedroom)was a super, super dark closet. In that super, super dark closet was ………. ( a long pause ) her friend! So she picked the lock and opened it. But she didn't know it was a shape shifting GHOST, and it pushed her in the cage! But when it was the end, her real friend came and busted her out! She was free, but now all they had to do was escape in 1 MINUTE , or they would be trapped. There were more OBSTACLES now, and they said together, “RUN!” So they ran! They ran through the GHOST and the masks. One of them almost tripped on the MONSTER’S foot! They were almost at the door when 100,000,000 GHOSTS were blocking the door, and they only had 10 seconds left!!!! But then they remembered GHOSTS are, well, sort of .INVISIBLE, so they ran through, and they were safe. It shut down the haunted house, and the MONSTER was trapped, and the 100,000,000 GHOSTS tried to go through the walks, but they couldn't. It was METAL, the whole thing, so they couldn't get out! And the friends said,”That is what they get!” The two friends laughed and skipped home. BUT THAT WAS NOT THE END! OR WAS IT? By: K
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Stephanie Tomlinson
10/25/2018 08:29:15 pm
I like the different colors and capital letters to draw attention to those parts of the story!! Very entertaining!
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