One night, Tom was trick or treating. Then, a Mad Scientist trapped Tom. As they were walking through the forest, Tom tried to escape. Tom tried kicking the Mad Scientist, but it didn't work because the Mad Scientist had a shield on. Tom also tried to slip out, but the Mad Scientist had sticky gloves on, so Tom couldn't get out.
As they entered the graveyard, Tom heard a weird creaking sound. It was his secret lab. The Mad Scientist put him in a vault. There Tom saw his old friend Jerry. Jerry disappeared two years ago on Halloween night when he was trick or treating with Tom. There were also a lot of other people there too. Tom also saw his old gym and music teachers. So that night, they made a plan to break out. When the Mad Scientist went to bed, Tom was not in his vault. That night, Tom broke out everybody. He stole the key from the Mad Scientist’s room and broke out. Then they were free, and they finished trick or treating. By: CTM
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Stephanie Tomlinson
10/22/2018 07:42:12 pm
Was the old school St Cornelius? lol
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Vickie Lucas
10/23/2018 03:21:00 pm
I love stories with happy endings, especially when they involve candy. Very well written, very descriptive and I like the way you included something that happened last Halloween, and tied it together with the current story.
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10/25/2018 05:05:02 am
I like it c
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