Once upon a time, a little boy lived in Madison, and he was just like any other boy. That little boy was in the forest, and that boy was me.
So like I said, I was in the forest, and the forest smelled minty, but the I found a house, so I went in, and the house was owned by a man. The man was mean! It seemed like he was trying to kill me because he was mad at me for some reason. I ran! The man kept following me, so I ran faster and faster, but he kept following me! So I found a bunker, and I went in, and I saw there was not a lock on the door! I ran farther in, but he kept following me! Finally, when I thought I lost him, I realized I did… not! He kept following me. It's like he was not going to stop until I was dead! Then I thought of setting a trap. I was going to ambush him! In the time I had, I found a bear trap and some wire, so what I was going to do was tie the wire to the roof and put the bear trap face up on the wire. When he walked in the wire would fall and cover him, and he would be stuck in the bear trap. He opened the door and ran in. My trap did not work. If he had walked in, he would have been caught! I was now trapped myself! I thought he was going to get me, but a werewolf bit him instead. I ran back to my house before the werewolf could get me. Or did I? Bum bum bum…. By: B
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Donna Simpson
10/22/2018 03:48:20 pm
B, I am so scared after reading your story. I was so afraid of the bad man, why was he so fast? Why didn't he leave you alone that terrible creepy man. Thank goodness for the werewolf. So happy you didn't let him bite you....Great story....
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Stephanie Tomlinson
10/22/2018 07:44:21 pm
well... did you?
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Vickie Lucas
10/23/2018 03:23:12 pm
Very well written, had me on the edge of my seat, I liked how you described the trap, and I was all ready for a happy ending, and now I am not sure, need to read the next story!
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af
10/24/2018 01:20:08 pm
hi I was so scared!?
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