I ran faster and faster, but it kept following me and getting closer and closer, so I ran into an old abandoned house. I looked out the window, and I didn't see the monster. Then I started to go upstairs, and the unstable stairs looked like they were going to fall. Upstairs, all I found were two keys, one yellow and one green.
Then I went downstairs to go outside, but the door was locked with a key pad, a red key lock, and a wiring system. I don't know what to do! Then I remember that I found two keys, so I went to the door, but an old man with a bat an a black suit with ketchup on it was standing there. I turned around, and he was behind me, so I ran to the basement, and I saw his car, but it didn't start. Then I went to open the door with the two keys, but the keys did not fit, so I explored to find the correct keys. But all of a sudden he was there again. I ran and ran, but he got closer and closer. Then, there was dead silence in the house. Then someone or something broke the floorboards above me. I yelled, but yelling was a great mistake. I was grabbed by from behind, but I hit him with the two keys, and then I was free. I found the keys and something sharp to cut the wires, and that was all I needed to open the door, so I went back, but the old man was there again. I ran away, and then after I came back, he wasn't there anymore. I went to open the door. Suddenly, I heard a scream. I was running away from the noise, and then I saw a ghost. It looked like the previous owner and his two children. I was stunned by what I saw! I swore that I was going to run into a wall! I went to the attic and saw standing there a lady with a white dress and long black hair. She had a very unusual smile, and she just looked at me while I started to walk backwards. I ran downstairs where I saw a man, but not the old man. This way a man who had a suit, and the pants were black and the shirt was white. His face was indescribable. His face looked like it had yellowish redish eyes and black hair. I screamed and ran faster. I thought I lost him, but I was wrong. I came upon an old board with letters on it, a yes or no on it, and a triangle with a hole in the middle. I touched it, but nothing happened, so I walked to the door. I opened it, but the door didn't open. After a minute, it finally opened, and I ran home. Whew!!!!!!!! The End Written by AF
9 Comments
A
10/22/2018 06:55:49 am
Hi A
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Stephanie Tomlinson
10/22/2018 07:39:14 pm
You must be tired after all of that running!
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af
10/23/2018 01:30:14 pm
no I am not tired but it was tiring
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Vickie Lucas
10/23/2018 03:15:51 pm
This was a really scary story, so many good characters, very good descriptions of each of them. I hope it was ketchup on his suit, and not something else!
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L
10/24/2018 05:06:47 am
Hi
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The man in the black suit with ketchup on it
10/24/2018 08:01:24 am
Hello. I am sorry that I scared you, but I was just wondering if you would have liked to play baseball with me. Maybe next time. I am glad you got home safely.
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Nicole Fialkowski
10/29/2018 02:26:34 pm
This is such a entertaining story Andrew, I really Enjoyed it. I continue to be impressed with your writing abilities. Great job!
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AF
10/29/2018 02:29:10 pm
Thank you for saying such great compliments.
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af
10/29/2018 03:42:03 pm
thank you for replying and have a great day good by for now!!!!!!
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