Once upon a time there was a boy,and his name was A. A found a house. It was a very dark house. A felt something touch his shoulder and started to turn around slowly, and there was a ghost.
The ghost was very fat, and he was chasing A. A was so scared that he went to the door, but it didn’t move, and the ghost was getting closer and closer. A ran up the stairs, and the ghost was still following him. The ghost kept getting closer and closer. Then A heard the door open. Then his dad peeked in, and saw him. He asked A if he saw the ghost too. Then he came in, and the door shut behind him. But then it was locked behind him. He asked A to jump out the window, so A did, and his Dad fought the ghost. He tried everything, but nothing helped. Then A found a fart gun in the backyard, so he threw the fart gun to his dad. He got the fart gun, and he pressed the trigger, and it did a fart. The ghost pretend to faint, so his dad open the door with the key. It unlocked, but he did not know that the ghost was right behind him. Then he closed the door over and over. They noticed that the ghost wasn't a ghost. It was a person who was using mind powers. He looked like a ghost, but he was actually a person. We asked him to stop, and he did. He set us free, and he didn't bother us anymore. Whew! By: A
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Mom and Dad
10/22/2018 05:38:10 pm
Wow, it sounds like both you and dad were extra brave!
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A
10/23/2018 02:41:40 pm
Haha
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Stephanie Tomlinson
10/22/2018 07:37:25 pm
Someone is obsessed with fart guns?
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A
10/23/2018 02:43:40 pm
I am
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Vickie Lucas
10/23/2018 03:12:37 pm
Those fart guns sure come in handy! Very well written, I like the way you lead the reader through the story, it's very well connected.
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A
10/24/2018 05:06:08 am
Thanks
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A
10/29/2018 10:04:33 am
Yah it does
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