I'm going to tell you why you should buy my house. At the end, you will love my house. People have loved this house over the years, and so will you.
There is a great view of the strange forest. In the forest, there are bears, deer, and geese. There is also a nature trail in the forest. Once I went in it, and it was awesome. There was a cave and a huge footprint! That is one reason why you should buy this house. There is also a huge basement with a 100 inch TV. The basement is so big that I have four cars down there. I love to play Madden 19 with my friends there too. We always play football down there, and the field is massive. That is another reason you should buy my house. My house is the biggest, and the best house in the world. Remember when I said, “I have four cars in my basement.” That isn’t even a portion of the cars that I have in my whole house. You can put so much stuff in this house it’s not even funny. I have fifteen hearses that I have used a couple of times when my friendly rats died. Afterwards, they came back as friendly ghosts. That is my last reason why you should buy my strange house. These are the reasons you should buy my strange house. If you want to check out this house, please call 2658-624-2828, and I will meet you sometime soon. I know you will love my house. PS. No REFUNDS!!!
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vickie lucas
10/14/2018 08:58:38 am
Very persuasive and descriptive. I am hoping the hearses don't come with the house. The whole ghost rat thing gave me a little pause, but it just doesn't outweigh the positive aspects of this house
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Stephanie Tomlinson
10/14/2018 02:42:22 pm
I like the size of the TV, but who needs all of those hearses? If the seller will take them with him, then I'll place an offer.
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Natalie McAndrew
10/15/2018 07:17:53 am
Very creative! I love the size of the TV and I think the friendly ghost are a plus!! I would buy this house.
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